It was a lazy Friday evening, the sort he would usually spend curled up with a good book, or watching Breakfast at Tiffany’s. He left the bedside windows open just so, transforming the unseasonal downpour into the subtle hint of an occasional stray water droplet striking his face, drinking in the pungent-yet-sugary-sweet fragrance of newly drenched mud that delved into his subconscious to pull out ephemeral images of nights soaking in the first rains, of childish enthusiasm, of adolescent trysts and times gone by.
He took his book and moved up to the terrace, lost in the surreal world of Toru Okada and his missing cat. The awning over his head offered barely sufficient protection against the capricious rain, and the rattle of raindrops on metal pulsed with an intensity that impinged softly on his senses. Deeply moved by the meandering yet powerful narrative that kept jumping between the real and the metaphysical, he felt a vague sense of disquiet that seemed to resonate with Toru’s frenzied struggles to make sense of his own existence.
Feeling the need to climb out of his deep dry well, he stepped out into rain which had now petered out into the slightest hint of a drizzle, seconds passing between each drop landing on outstretched hands. He left his book behind and found a relatively dry spot, lying on his back to gaze at a sky striated with sinister jumbles of menacing clouds.
Midway to the horizon, he noticed a mysterious spot incessantly radiating lightning bolts, some small and harmless, some massive, arcing across the night sky through the cloud cover. Mesmerized by this magnificent display of nature’s muscle, he lay on the ground as the lightning slowly drew near; questioning if he was witnessing the divine might of the Gods in action, or an unremarkable scientific phenomenon.
In a while, it stopped drizzling, and a gentle zephyr blew through the sparse tree cover, soothing and encouraging birds and insects alike to twist and shout. Reveling in the music of the night, he turned his back on the soundless source of nature’s fury, to lie on his stomach with eyes closed, relishing the comforting feel of the cool breeze. Feeling truly at peace after a long time, he glanced upwards. And noticed the antenna over his head as a lightning bolt came arcing down out of the silent night sky.
Image copyrighted to Storm Thorgerson, album art for ‘Delicate Sound of Thunder’, Pink Floyd live album, 1988.
I like, I like!
ReplyDeleteYou should SO continue!
I ditto the same :) you should SO continue!
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ReplyDelete@Kavity: Thanks for hauling me off my ass, to do this. I do intend to :)
a very deep descriptive and intriguing writing after a looongg time...
ReplyDeleteawesome stuff...cant wait for more!
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Liked whatever I could understand which was little enough!! But do continue! Some day I might be able to read this! :)
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Awesome!!! I see that the much needed nursing break is waking up the writer in you:P
ReplyDeleteGood shite! Blog on!
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